The “N” letter’s bottom curve not goes perfectly after the “O”‘s left curve. To make it simple-compact, just use the same width of the “D-J” words as the “N”‘s full width. Then do something with the “OAH” to be more compact. Maybe the “N”‘s right side make like an italic letter to align with the “H” from “OAH”… just advices…
[...] on Pihi’s comments from the previous logo post, I made a few quick adjustments. Still not happy with it, but I’ll see where I can go with it [...]
The “N” letter’s bottom curve not goes perfectly after the “O”‘s left curve. To make it simple-compact, just use the same width of the “D-J” words as the “N”‘s full width. Then do something with the “OAH” to be more compact. Maybe the “N”‘s right side make like an italic letter to align with the “H” from “OAH”…
just advices…
[...] on Pihi’s comments from the previous logo post, I made a few quick adjustments. Still not happy with it, but I’ll see where I can go with it [...]